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I just spent two delightfully grueling days with my daughter Jill driving from Reno to Vail. How can something be delightful AND grueling you ask? It was grueling because it meant 15 hours in her car packed so full that we were left with less space than Alan Shepherd had in his space capsule. The delightful part was spending time with her before she relocated to Vail, and she agreed to let me to read my book aloud for approximately 14 of the 15-hour drive.
Fortunately for me, Jill didn’t put reading my book aloud in her “Grueling” column.
Reading my writing aloud allowed (love the unintentional homophone use here) me to “hear” my characters’ voices, spot flaws, and tighten sentences. I recommend that everyone do it with everything they write. If you don’t believe me, try it . . . even if it is on the next email you write. In addition to making the writing stronger, it forces typos out into the open. The buggers have a way of hiding when you read your words on paper or on the computer.
At a rest stop in the middle of the Bonneville Salt Flats in Utah, this sign greeted us. Rather disconcerting, don’t you think? It reminded me of the editing process.
One thing my wise old grandmother taught me when she discovered my love of writing — and she had but a first grade education but a Ph.D. from the School of Hard Knocks — was to put your words away for 24 hours in a deep, dark drawer or a closet. Get them out and re-read them. Typos, bad grammar, etc., will jump off the page at you.
Ha Ha! Not only will they jump off the page at you but will also mug you and steal your lunch money.
All my lunch money was stolen by the bullies in school back in the 1960s. lol
What is their address? I’ll go beat them up for you.
I think one is dead and the others are in prison. No surprise to me about any of them.
Haha Mom I love you.