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Avoid the verb To Be, editing, Overused Words, Self-editing, Strong Verbs, Strong vs Weak Words, Strong Words, Weak Verbs, Weak Words, writers, writing, Writing Advice, writing tips
Yesterday we looked at ways to avoid using the present tense of the verb “to be.” Today, let’s reflect on the past. The past tense of “to be,” that is.
I know, I know . . . you all know the forms of the past tense of “to be,” but here you go anyway:
I was
We were
You were
He was
She was
It was
They were
Who was
I was sitting at my computer waiting for inspiration to hit.
Same thing happens to me.
While I stared at my blank computer screen, my fickle mistress Madame Inspiration, was on a date with someone else.
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When we were finished reading Robin’s manuscript, our book group banned her for life.
Aw . . . how sad.
We read Robin’s manuscript and sent it to Mr. Pulitzer for consideration for next year’s prize.
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She was surprised when she received a rejection notice from Mr. Pulitzer
Really? Is she delusional?
Robin framed the rejection notice from Mr. Pulitzer because he was kind enough to add a handwritten note at the bottom that said, “Your novel would make good kindling.”
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It was a shock to Robin when she realized he meant her novel would make good kindling to start a fire, not that the book is Kindle-worthy.
No need for lighter fluid!
Robin smashed the framed rejection letter when she realized he dissed her, not complimented her.
Sorry!
Robin Coyle 